Score: 10

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submission: Tywo At Large Ep. #3

date: November 1, 2008

Well, i can't really find anything wrong. Except for some voices being a tad louder (like Pat's) but that's a minor issue.

It was really funny, and i love how Tywo always gets his face on something, wether it's the wall or the floor.

Definatly a great movie !

(§ Jorma Poyer AKA Deflektor §)
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Score: 6

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submission: Death Note ending demo

date: October 23, 2008

Let's see, then.

The drawing is pretty well done, if you didn't trace it. The old movie effect is well done, too.

I believe the music is from Death Note, so it fits the movie, no problem.

I know this is a demo, so i won't complain about the shortness.

I give it a 6 but that's only because it's a demo. If the full flash is as good as the demo, you'll easily get a 9.

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Score: 5

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submission: MC Hammurabi's Code

date: October 23, 2008

Let's see, then.

Graphically, it's pretty unbalanced. Some parts are decent, some others are good, and some others are bad. Maybe you didn't spend much time on some parts. If so, you should take more time on each scene.

The story is kinda hard to follow, especially if you don't know a thing about Hammurabi. At least, you should put a text with explanation about what's going on.

At last, music was ok. Nothing bad, nothing good.

To sum up, you should put more work into your movie and add some background information, especially when it comes to History.

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Score: 10

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submission: Teh Neutral Collab! (caps!!!)

date: November 15, 2008

Excellent work, my friend. Too bad my part kinda sounds out of place, there.
Also, ImperfectDisciple and RenoakRhythm did a great work.

Score: 7

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submission: HungHimselfWithAGuitarString

date: November 1, 2008

Let's see, then.

The guitar play isn't that sloppy, but it could be louder, and could use some reverb, too.

The piece in itself is catchy and has a lot of variety. That's good points for you.

Nice ending, but the voices seem to be cut off at this part.

And i have to agree with Haggard, it needs vocals.

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Score: 9

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submission: Asteriod Chillout

date: November 1, 2008

Let's see, then.

Well, i don't have anything to say, to tell the truth. It's ambient, it's cool and that's enough for me.

(§ Jorma Poyer AKA Deflektor §)
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