Score: 10

"Hello !"

submission: Teh Neutral Collab! (caps!!!)

date: November 15, 2008

Excellent work, my friend. Too bad my part kinda sounds out of place, there.
Also, ImperfectDisciple and RenoakRhythm did a great work.

Score: 7

"Hello"

submission: HungHimselfWithAGuitarString

date: November 1, 2008

Let's see, then.

The guitar play isn't that sloppy, but it could be louder, and could use some reverb, too.

The piece in itself is catchy and has a lot of variety. That's good points for you.

Nice ending, but the voices seem to be cut off at this part.

And i have to agree with Haggard, it needs vocals.

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Score: 9

"Hello"

submission: Asteriod Chillout

date: November 1, 2008

Let's see, then.

Well, i don't have anything to say, to tell the truth. It's ambient, it's cool and that's enough for me.

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Score: 7

"Hello"

submission: TransAmbience

date: November 1, 2008

Let's see, then.

The intro is nice. It made me get into the song smoothly.

The bass thingy is too quiet from 1:11. Bass is important, and it's important to hear it, especially in Trance.

Also, i noticed most of the notes in various parts are a bit off. You should be careful with, because i heard quite a bunch of them.

Nice ending, though.

I guess that's about it.

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Score: 7

"Hello"

submission: Insecure

date: November 1, 2008

Let's see, then.

It's a pretty weird piece, yet fun to listen to. I have to issue with it, though.

The first one being the fact that the beat is off the track at 0:24-0:35.

The second being the mastering. There is some static at some parts. I you remake this piece, i suggest you lower the general volume of the piece. That way, you'll get rid of the static, and listeners could increase their headphones/speakers volume if it isn't loud enough for them.

I guess i said about everything.

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Score: 7

"Hello"

submission: Paper Mario - Tutankoopa

date: November 1, 2008

Let's see, then.

I didn't play the first Paper Mario, so i will base my review on your piece only.

The bass need some reverb. As the intro is slowly built up, the bass playing alone and lacking resonance kinda ruins the intro.

The middle part is nice, though. I have no major issue in there.

At last, the outro would have been better if you just kept the melody playing to the end with the fade-out.

Overall, it's still a nice piece.

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Score: 8

"Hello"

submission: (FMC) -=Sudden Death=-

date: November 1, 2008

Let's see, then.

There was variety, but i think you could have varied the beat more. It's about the same troughout the whole song.

I don't mind the ending. Even if it sounds like it was cut in the middle of piece, i consider this a "suspensive" ending.

I guess that's about it. Pretty neat and catchy.

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Score: 9

"Hello"

submission: Circle of Flight

date: October 25, 2008

Let's see, then.

I agree with what other reviewers said. It sounds more like "floating" instead of "flight", which isn't a bad thing, mind you. Floating is more relaxing, more ambient.

I could swear that if i close my eyes, i would bee floating in sky with full of bright colors. No, i'm not on drugs (i'm on insomnia, that's it).

Well, i don't have much to say, not even a piece of advice. Good work, and best of luck for the MAC !

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Score: 8

"Hello"

submission: Where'd I Put my Keys?

date: October 25, 2008

Let's see, then.

It loops very well. I can swear i didn't noticed when it looped.

However, the volume is a bit saturating at some parts. I'd suggest you either lower the general volume, or locate the sound responsible of the static and lower it's volume, it depends on how much you would like that sound to be heard (i believe it's that sweeping sound).

Other than that, it's a cool piece.

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Score: 9

"Hello again"

submission: Solus- Forever Never

date: October 25, 2008

Let's see, then.

A fine mix of genres, i must say !

But i think this piece could be even more epic with a stronger and louder beat.

And...Damnit, i hate it when i have nothing to say ! Serves me well for reviewing well having not slept for two days.

Anyways, amazing stuff !

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