Score: 10

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submission: Tywo At Large Ep. #3

date: November 1, 2008

Well, i can't really find anything wrong. Except for some voices being a tad louder (like Pat's) but that's a minor issue.

It was really funny, and i love how Tywo always gets his face on something, wether it's the wall or the floor.

Definatly a great movie !

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Score: 6

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submission: Death Note ending demo

date: October 23, 2008

Let's see, then.

The drawing is pretty well done, if you didn't trace it. The old movie effect is well done, too.

I believe the music is from Death Note, so it fits the movie, no problem.

I know this is a demo, so i won't complain about the shortness.

I give it a 6 but that's only because it's a demo. If the full flash is as good as the demo, you'll easily get a 9.

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Score: 5

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submission: MC Hammurabi's Code

date: October 23, 2008

Let's see, then.

Graphically, it's pretty unbalanced. Some parts are decent, some others are good, and some others are bad. Maybe you didn't spend much time on some parts. If so, you should take more time on each scene.

The story is kinda hard to follow, especially if you don't know a thing about Hammurabi. At least, you should put a text with explanation about what's going on.

At last, music was ok. Nothing bad, nothing good.

To sum up, you should put more work into your movie and add some background information, especially when it comes to History.

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Score: 3

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submission: Obama Dress Up

date: October 23, 2008

Let's see, then.

I think you should have added McCain, at least an option to change the head. Also, there are not enough items and backgrounds.

Well, in fact that's about everything i have to say.

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Score: 2

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submission: Your New Friend

date: October 23, 2008

Let's see, then.

Overused is the word that describe this flash the best.

No animation (although i don't see how to add animation in this kind of flash), no audio either. Just a plain window with some text, not always funny.

I'm sorry, but i didn't like this flash at all.

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Score: 5

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submission: BBS Awesome Points Quiz

date: October 23, 2008

Let's see, then.

Well, i could pretty much say the same thing as Haggard. This would need a turn off music button and a replay button.

I will also add that it probably needs more questions. Maybe flash and audio related, like "how often you listen to NG audio" or "do you vote each time you watch a flash", this kind of things.

On another note, i got 19 !

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Score: 3

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submission: SneakyPizzShoppingCenter1

date: October 23, 2008

Let's see, then.

Didn't make sense at all. Some random pics and a description with it. I know this is supposed to be a joke, being seeing how many movies you created, i was expecting something better.

Graphically, it could have benefited from some animation. And i guess that's about it.

The music was nice, though. At least it sounded like this kind of music you can hear at a mall.

Overall, i didn't like it. It looks like you didn't put much effort into it. Again, i do know this is a joke but it would be better for everyone if you did a real movie.

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Score: 6

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submission: Sentry- 1

date: October 22, 2008

Let's see, then.

The graphics, as previously said are pretty rough. Yet, the animation isn't that bad. It's even pretty decent at some parts (like when the guy is running and you see only his feet). But that needs practice, it will come eventually. If you do get a tablet, things will get better quickly.

The voice acting is good, too, but yet again, you need to keep the voice and sounds at about the same volume level. Audacity can help you with that, and it's pretty simple to use.

And finally, the plot needs more details. You're not forced to add scenes. For example, you could have begun with a black screen and a narrator talking about backstory and stuff.

Now, i guess i said everything i wanted to say. I know i'm repeating myself, but nothing beats practice.

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Score: 5

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submission: Father & Son In: Trip

date: October 22, 2008

Let's see, then.

Don't worry, i'll take into account the fact that this is your first flash.

You seem to be beginning to be knowing some animations techniques. However, The free hand drawings really ruins it. Again, i do know this is your first time and i won't come back to it. Things come with practice.

Now for the sound issue. The other reviewers already said it, but be careful with the mic, especially when you're doing screams or whatever is loud, you really need to put your mouth away from the mic. Even if the screams sounds a bit low on volume, it's still better than being too loud.

I guess i said everything. The only thing i would suggest is to keep on practicing. I'm pretty confident you'll get there.

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Score: 7

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submission: Ghouls

date: October 22, 2008

Let's see, then.

Graphically, it's quite good, even if it's simple. Animations were good, though. Also, good colors, it gave this flash an even more cartooney style.

I like the humor. At the same time cartooney and violent.

My big complaint would come from the song you chose for the flash. (i mean the earthbound one). I didn't sound like a halloween song, unlike the others. Besides, it was pretty average, quality-wise.

I guess i said everything.

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